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Four Brothers Four Sisters 14 by ~hinatakiba4evur:iconhinatakiba4evur:



"DUUUUUUUUUUUUUUDE!!!THEY STOLE OUR BIKES!" Naruto yelled

"WHAT?!"

"Well not yours but SHikamaru's...anyway...back to freaking out...NOOOOO!!"

"They must have used it to get home..."Shikamaru said

"We have to get the bike back though..." Kiba pointed out

"Yeah...but isn't security  like really tight now?"Naruto asked

"Yep, but still, we know you want Sakura more than the bike." Kiba laughed

Naruto blushed "SHUT UP KIBA!"

"BITE ME!" Kiba said

"Guys let's focus on the problem at hand shall we?" Shikamaru said

"Yeah Naruto." Kiba laughed

"GRRRRRRRRRRR THAT'S IT!!!!!!!" Shikamaru restrained Naruto before he could touch Kiba."LET ME AT THAT MUT! I'LL KNOCK HIM INTO NEXT DECEMBER!!"

"If you can..." Kiba said walking away

"OH YOU BET I CAN!!!"

"KIBA! NARUTO! JUST SHUT UP! IF NEJI WAS HERE YOU WOULD ALL BE ACTING LIKE ANGELS!" Shikamaru yelled

"BUT HE ISN'T IS HE?! NO HE'S NOT! HE HAD TO BE STUPID AND FALL IN LOVE! AND JUST LOOK AT US FALLING IN LOVE WITH THE SAME FAMILY! EVEN THOUGH WE CAN'T HELP IT! NEJI SHOULD HAVE JUST BEEN MORE CAREFUL OR SOMETHING! HE SHOULD HAVE JUST IGNORED THAT TENTEN GIRL!" Kiba ranted

"KIBA! BE QUIET!" Shikamaru yelled

"OH DON"T TELL ME TO BE QUIET! NEJI HAS PRACTICALLY RAISED US OUR WHOLE LIVES! YOU THINK ITS EASY TO FORGET ABOUT HIM?! EVERY THOUGHT OF HIM HURTS US! WE SHOULD HAVE BEEN WITH HIM! WE SHOULD HAVE TOOK BTETER CARE OF HIM!"

"Just shut up Kiba..."Naruto said, crying.

"Whatever I am OUTTA HERE!" he said slamming the door

"C'mon Naruto let's go get the bike..." Shikamaru said as he comforted Naruto
©2008-2009 ~hinatakiba4evur
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:iconterrirules:
wow,
i haven't seen updates in a while...
nice chapter!=D

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:icongsnks:
Good chapter. Funny moments. Lots of capital letters:O_o:.
:iconhinatakiba4evur:
^^; sorry i was gone thats why

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Love can sometimes be magic. But magic can sometimes... just be an illusion.

Art is the only way to run away without leaving home.

A lot of people are afraid of heights. Not me, I'm afraid of widths.
:iconhinatakiba4evur:
Yea it was an angry moment >.>

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Love can sometimes be magic. But magic can sometimes... just be an illusion.

Art is the only way to run away without leaving home.

A lot of people are afraid of heights. Not me, I'm afraid of widths.
:iconterrirules:
thats ok!=D
you could use a break right?:giggle:
i hope to see more romanceness!~:love:

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:iconhinatakiba4evur:
:giggle: yea I think we even it out because :iconbigpac09: loves NaruSaku and I love KibaHina

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Love can sometimes be magic. But magic can sometimes... just be an illusion.

Art is the only way to run away without leaving home.

A lot of people are afraid of heights. Not me, I'm afraid of widths.
:iconallyonshinezutara:
that seems like a huge burn in all their hearts Sweet chapter

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Join ~lostcrazylonelyclub Show you true misunderstood feelings from words to pictures-i'm a romantic I'll do anything for love fics
:iconterrirules:
THATS WHAT I THOUGHT!XD
and it's so cool how she sets-up kibahina moments for you to write
and you set-up narusaku moments for her to write:excited:
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WHAT'S GONNA HAPPEN NEXT!?:w00t:

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Thanks

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Love can sometimes be magic. But magic can sometimes... just be an illusion.

Art is the only way to run away without leaving home.

A lot of people are afraid of heights. Not me, I'm afraid of widths.

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